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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Beside that, yeah I can't tell how he got on the roof. He looks like he is about to leap to the right in panel 3 (away from the building he's on). So when he's in panel 4, he looks like he is across the street on a different building. Especially since Spiderman is so close to him, now.
But hey if you got a bunch of pros telling you the page is perfect than don't sweat my silly comments. You're really good and with stronger layouts it would be even better. But that could just be me.
Hope you don't mind the points, often time people here just say 'great' and not much else. Keep up the good work.
seriously, you can't tell that he's holding onto the top of the building in panel 3, explaining how he got to the rooftop in panel for. or how in panel 1, he's by a big hole, panel 2 the top of the hole is below him, and in 3 you can't see it but he's got the rooftop, and in 4 he's on the rooftop.
i'm not about to show the progression of him moving any more tightly, comics aren't like animation or films in that way. you have to take key scenes and illustrate them. most of the time the writer has picked the scenes out for you, and they're usually right. i've only had to add or subtract panels a few times from the work i've done, and even then i did it with the writer and/or editors approoval.
like i said, i don't mind crits, when there warranted, and i feel everything you decided to crit about, were clear as day. the info is all right there.
People just digging like you said!!