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spidey sample page 1by *natelovett

Cartoons & Comics / Digital Media / Comics / Other

page 1 of 3 sample pages i worked up for marvel.

i got the script from todd dezago, it's from marvel adventure spiderman #47.

as usual, pencils, inks and colors by me.

-nate

~tomjf Mar 7, 2009

Well if anything I mentioned is solved by the dialogue, then no worries.

But based on the pictures alone, I can't tell what Phil is doing, is he talking to JJJ? But again if there will be word balloons of JJJ talking than it should be cool.

~tomjf Feb 27, 2009

Really nice work. Your drawing ability is fun and impressive. The layout looks good too. Only thing I'd question is the fourth panel, who is Phil talking to? I don't know the script, so I can be wrong. But I'd guess he's talking to Betty, if so I'd put Betty in the shot. Right now he's just staring off into nothing.

*natelovett Feb 28, 2009 Professional General Artist

he's got the door to JJJ's office open, so that's who he's talking to. the script said over peter's should we see phil, peaking into JJJ's office.

is what he doing not clear to anyone else? i'm not trying to be snide or anything, but they're all clearly outside of JJJ's office, and then phil's arm disappears behind a wall in panel 4, with the door at a completely different angle, and his focus is in that direction.

!quarkenzyme Feb 26, 2009

did you choose the colours?

*natelovett Feb 26, 2009 Professional General Artist

yup, i make all of my own color choices, unless it's been stated otherwise in a script.

!quarkenzyme Feb 26, 2009

well the getup on jameson seems pretty casual for his character, since hes usually a real executive sort of guy, you know? unless thats what you were going for. its not bad or anything, just seems a little out of character, thats all. just thought id share. c:

*natelovett Feb 26, 2009 Professional General Artist

that's because that's not JJ, he's behind the door. that is phil sheldon, he's another photographer for the planet.

!quarkenzyme Feb 26, 2009

AH! okay. my bad!

hehehe

he has a similar 'stache and 'do. heheh

~PatCarlucci Feb 26, 2009

I love the look of this page!

*natelovett Feb 26, 2009 Professional General Artist

thanks!

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